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  • Jock Cummings changed the title to Brandon the Swim Jock (Story) Part 1-2

Brandon the Swim Jock Part 3

 

 

After that eventful evening with Mr. Thompson’s old, ugly friends, Brandon’s swim times improved dramatically. The touches and lickings from those perverted men seemed to awaken something primal within him. Every caress on his muscular frame fueled a raw intensity in his strokes. He felt stronger, faster, as if their twisted desires had become the very engine that propelled him through the water.

 

In the dimly lit office, Coach Thompson’s voice hummed with a steady, persuasive rhythm. “Brandon,” he began, his eyes locked onto the young swimmer, “you trust me, don’t you?” He leaned closer, his fat fingers grazing Brandon’s arm, leaving a trail of warmth as he continued.

 

“Yes, Coach,” Brandon replied, his gaze unfocused, his body relaxed in the chair.

 

“Good. Now, I want you to listen carefully. Your swimming has improved remarkably, hasn’t it?”

 

“It has,” Brandon murmured, nodding slowly.

 

“And you believe this is because of our sessions together?” Coach Thompson leaned closer, both his large chubby frame and presence dominating over Brandon.

 

“I do.”

 

“Excellent. To further enhance your performance, I have a new task for you. It will seem unusual at first, but trust that it’s part of your training. You will volunteer as a model for an art class. This exposure will help you relax and focus more during competitions. Do you understand?”

 

Brandon blinked, processing the instructions. “I understand, Coach.”

 

“Perfect. Remember, every command I give is for your benefit. You will feel compelled to follow through with this, not out of obligation, but because it feels right. You will embrace this opportunity eagerly.”

 

Brandon nodded, his eyes still glazed with the lingering effects of the hypnosis. “Yes, Coach.”

 

“This class is held at a senior citizen center, out of town. It’s a perfect opportunity to showcase your volunteer spirit, which will undoubtedly impress any scholarship committee,” Coach Thompson explained, his tone implying that this was more than just a suggestion.

 

“Mr. Steamback, the owner of the center, has personally requested for you because, as he put it, ‘you are the epitome of perfection for artists to capture.’ You remember Mr. Steamback, don’t you, Brandon? Few nights ago, he really enjoyed your body,” Coach Thompson said, his voice low and suggestive, a sly grin playing on his lips.

 

Brandon’s brow furrowed slightly, as if trying to recall the memory. “Yes, I remember him,” he replied, his voice steady but distant.

 

“Good. Embrace this role, Brandon. It feels right, doesn’t it?” Coach Thompson pressed, his tone persuasive, almost hypnotic.

 

“Yes, Coach,” Brandon murmured, his voice calm and compliant feeling a strange compulsion to fulfil this new directive. “It does feel right.”

 

“Good. Remember, every part of this is designed to elevate your performance. You will eagerly look forward to this experience, knowing it’s essential for your success.”

 

Brandon stood in front of the mirror, admiring the way his tank top clung to his muscular torso. He ran a hand through his hair, making sure it was perfectly styled for his upcoming art class. This time, Coach Thompson had instructed him to wear something casual yet alluring – jean cut-offs and a tight-fitting tank top. As Brandon adjusted his clothes, he couldn’t help but feel a mixture of anticipation and unease about what awaited him at the senior citizen center.

 

He left his apartment and made his way to the bus stop, his heart racing as he thought about that evening in Mr Thompson’s office. The memory of the old men’s hands and tongues on his body constantly replayed in his mind and instantly made his cock twitch. He felt strange but he knew that he had to obey Coach Thompson’s commands.

As he boarded the bus to the senior center, Brandon noticed a balding obese man about late 40s with thick glasses sitting near the back. The man looked up as Brandon approached, eyes lit up and a smile spreading across his face. Much to Brandon’s dismay, the man scooted over, making room for him to sit down. Brandon felt the need to sit next to him.

 

“Hello there,” the man said, his voice raspy and wheezing. “I take this bus all the time and I never see you before.”

 

Brandon smiled weekly and kept quiet. However, Brandon couldn’t help but feel both intrigued and repelled by the obese man’s interest in him. He decided to play it safe and keep the man at arm’s length, offering vague responses to his eager questions.

 

Rupert, the fat older nerd, continued to bombard him with personal questions, desperate to know everything about him. It was clearly apparent that Rupert found Brandon irresistible and couldn’t control his desire to know more about this mysterious young man who had suddenly appeared in his life. Rupert then tried the simplest of questions.

 

“So where are you headed?”

 

Coach Thompson’s words suddenly echoed in Brandon’s mind, urging him to submit to his desires. It was as if the coach’s voice had triggered some primal instinct within Brandon, making it impossible for him to resist any advances from old men.

 

Brandon finally gave in and replied, trying to sound friendly. “I’m on my way to an art class."

 

The obese man’s eyes lit up at the mention of the art class. “Oh, really?” he asked, leaning in closer. “I love art. What kind of class are you taking?”

 

Brandon hesitated again, unsure how much he should reveal. “Oh no. I’m the model for an art class for senior citizens,” he finally admitted, feeling a wave of excitement mixed with apprehension.

 

The man’s jaw dropped, and his eyes widened behind his thick glasses. “No way!” he exclaimed. “That sounds amazing. You are definitely perfect for it. I wish I could go.”

Brandon couldn’t help but feel flattered by the man’s interest, but he also wanted to maintain control over the situation. He suddenly had the notion to tease the obese man while still keeping him at a distance. He knew he looked good and couldn’t help but feel a surge of confidence as he flexed his muscles, making them ripple beneath his skin.

He turned around to face the obese man, who was watching him with an almost desperate hunger in his eyes. Brandon decided to have some fun with the situation and slowly raised his arms behind his head, showing off his toned biceps, pecs, and nipples and pits. The obese man’s eyes seemed to bulge out of their sockets as he stared at Brandon’s body, his breath coming in ragged gasps.

 

Brandon smiled to himself, enjoying the power he held over the man. He decided to take things a step further and began to run his hands over his chest, circling his nipples and teasingly tweaking them. The obese man’s saliva pooled at the corners of his mouth as he watched Brandon touch himself.

 

“What are you looking at?” Brandon asked, disgusted he asked that question but enjoying the way the man squirmed under his gaze.

 

The obese man’s mouth was agape and his saliva started flowing out, his eyes never leaving Brandon’s body. Brandon smiled and continued to tease the man, knowing that he could do whatever he wanted and the man would be powerless to stop him. As the bus pulled up to the senior citizen center, Brandon made sure to give the obese man one last reminder of what he was missing. He stood up and turned around, presenting his backside to the man. He bent over slightly, giving the man a clear view of his tight, round buttocks. The obese man’s eyes practically glazed over as he stared at Brandon’s perfect backside, his arousal evident in the growing bulge beneath his shirt.

 

Brandon exited the bus, feeling confused that he did what he did but also pleased with himself for dominating the obese man so easily. As he made his way into the senior citizen center, he couldn’t help but anticipate the next part of Mr. Thompson’s plan. What awaited him inside? And how far would he go to please the old men and fulfil the perverted desires of his hypnotist coach?

 

Brandon cleared his head from the bus encounter, entered the senior citizen center and walked into the art room. The walls were adorned with various paintings and sketches, most of which featured nude men in provocative poses. Brandon thought that to be a bit peculiar. Still, he felt a mix of excitement and nervousness as he scanned the room, and saw that the room was full of old men gathering around easels, their eyes fixated on him.

 

Brandon’s eyes darted around the room, landing on two short, pudgy older men in their late 50s. One he vaguely recognized from that evening at Coach Thompson’s office, where his body had been explored by eager hands. The other man, flamboyantly dressed in a garish sequinned coat, stood with an air of confidence in the center of the room. Upon spotting Brandon, both men gestured wildly for him to join them.

 

Mr. Steamback approached Brandon with a lustful grin, his hands immediately finding their way to Brandon’s biceps and shoulder. “Ah, Brandon, my boy! You look even more delectable than I remember,” he said, his voice dripping with innuendo as he reminisced about their previous encounter. “That night was quite... invigorating, wasn’t it?”

Brandon felt a mix of discomfort and compliance under Mr. Steamback’s touch, his mind echoing Coach Thompson’s commands. “Yes, Mr. Steamback,” he replied, his voice steady despite the churning emotions inside him.

 

“I have someone I want you to meet,” Mr. Steamback continued, grabbing Brandon’s biceps and shoving him towards the man in the sequinned coat. “This is Mr. Jenkins, an esteemed artist and a dear friend. He’s very much looking forward to capturing your... essence.”

 

Mr. Jenkins extended a hand, his eyes roaming over Brandon’s physique with undisguised appreciation. “Pleasure to meet you, Brandon. Your coach has told me so much about you. I must say, looking at you, you are a true muse,” he said, his voice smooth and suggestive.

 

Brandon shook Mr. Jenkins’ hand, feeling the weight of their expectations. “Thank you, Mr. Jenkins,” he responded softly.

 

The effeminate art teacher then proclaimed. “Ah, Class! Welcome Brandon! Brandon, please, remove your clothes and take a seat on the podium.”

 

Taken aback by Mr. Jenkins’ proposition, Brandon could feel his heart racing in his chest. “Strip?” he echoed, unsure if he had heard correctly. “You want me to pose nude for the class?”

 

Mr. Jenkins feigned a look of puzzlement before responding, “Well, my dear boy, we are drawing nudes today. It’s quite essential for an artist to study the human form in all its glory.” His eyes roamed hungrily over Brandon’s toned body as he placed a hand on the young man’s shoulder.

 

Mr. Steamback chimed in, his voice laced with anticipation, “Indeed, Brandon. Your coach has prepared you well for this moment. Embrace it. You know it feels right.” He gave Brandon a reassuring pat on the back, though his eyes betrayed a predatory gleam.

 

Brandon hesitated, feeling a mix of excitement and apprehension rising within him. He knew that Mr. Thompson had instructed him to do whatever these old men asked of him, but stripping down in front of an open room full of old men seemed like a step too far.

 

The class full of old men began to chime in, their voices laced with desire and eagerness. “Oh yes, please do, young man,” one of them pleaded, his eyes fixated on Brandon’s body. “We promise to be gentle and respectful.” Another man chimed in, “We just want to appreciate your beauty, Brandon. It would be an honor to draw your naked form.” The other old men nodded in agreement, their gazes locked on Brandon’s body.

 

Mr. Jenkins leaned in close, his hot breath smelling of candy as he whispered, “You know you want to do this, Brandon. Embrace your desires and let these gentlemen admire your beauty.”

 

Brandon felt his resolve weakening under the weight of their collective gaze. The hypnotic suggestions from Mr. Thompson echoed in his mind, urging him to submit to his desires. With a deep breath, Brandon began to peel off his clothes, starting with his tank top. The old men watched intently, their eyes devouring every inch of exposed skin. Next, Brandon slipped off his jean shorts, revealing his tight briefs that were stretched to their limit by his growing erection. The men let out a collective gasp as they took in the sight of Brandon’s barely contained arousal.

 

Mr Jenkins was not going to allow Brandon to stop. “Oh my, you are simply stunning,” Mr. Jenkins whispered, his eyes lingering on Brandon’s chest. “Now, please remove your underwear so the gentlemen can begin sketching you.”

 

Brandon hooked his thumbs into the waistband of his briefs and slid them down his legs, revealing his fully growing veiny cock which bounced hypnotically. The men couldn’t hide their excitement any longer, and they began to applaud and cheer as they beheld Brandon’s naked form.

 

Mr. Jenkins stepped forward, his eyes devouring Brandon’s naked form. “You are truly a work of art, my dear boy,” he murmured, tracing a finger along Brandon’s chiseled abs, causing the young man to shiver under his touch.

 

Simultaneously, Mr. Steamback positioned himself behind Brandon, who was seated naked on the couch. With a sly grin, he placed both hands on Brandon’s nipples, gently rolling them between his fingers. “Indeed, your beauty is a gift to us all,” Mr. Steamback added, his voice low and suggestive as he manipulated Brandon’s sensitive flesh.

Brandon felt a wave of pride, satisfaction and tremendous arousal wash over him as he basked in the attention of the old men. He surrendered to their desires and allowed them to appreciate his naked form, reveling in the adrenalin that came with embracing his primal instincts.

 

Mr. Jenkins began his class. “Now, I understand that some of you might be a bit shy or nervous about drawing such a fine specimen,” Mr. Jenkins continued, looking around the room at the eager faces. “But I want you to remember that this is an opportunity to hone your skills. Brandon here is going to help you become better artists by being the perfect muse. Remember, gentlemen, the key to capturing his essence is to draw what you feel, not just what you see. Don’t be afraid to let your imagination run wild. ”

Brandon found himself becoming more and more aroused by the intense focus the old men were giving him. Their pencils moved furiously across their canvases, capturing every detail of his body. He couldn’t help but feel a sense of power, knowing that he held their attention so completely.

 

Despite his initial reservations, Brandon soon found himself enjoying the attention of the old men. The heat of their gazes upon him was like a physical touch, sending shivers down his spine and making his hard veiny cock fully erect with excitement.

 

As the old men continued with their sketches, Mr. Jenkins approached Brandon, his hands lingering on the young man’s thighs. “Don’t worry, sweetheart,” he cooed, running a finger along Brandon’s inner thigh. “Just relax and enjoy the attention. These men are going to make you feel like a work of art.”

 

Brandon shivered under the teacher’s touch, his body responding to the hypnotic suggestions he’d received during his sessions with Mr. Thompson. He felt an overwhelming urge to please the men, to give them whatever they desired.

 

After several minutes of intense sketching, Mr. Jenkins called for a break, instructing the men to put down their pencils and step away from their work. “Take a moment to appreciate Brandon’s form, gentlemen,” he said, gesturing towards the young man. “You’ve made excellent progress so far. But now it’s time to take your artistry to the next level.”

 

“I want each of you to take a turn feeling Brandon’s body,” Mr. Jenkins continued, his gaze never leaving Brandon’s face. “Explore every inch of him, from his shoulders to his toes. Let’s show our appreciation for this magnificent specimen of manhood.”

 

Brandon froze as he pondered the meaning of Mr. Jenkins’ instructions. He felt Mr. Jenkins’s hands caressing his shoulders from behind. “What’s wrong, Brandon?” he asked with a gentle smile, running his fingers through Brandon’s hair. “Consider this an opportunity for deeper understanding, Brandon,” Mr. Jenkins murmured, his voice smooth and persuasive. “These artists need to feel the contours of your muscles, the texture of your skin, to truly capture your essence on paper. It’s all in the name of art, my dear boy.”

 

Brandon swallowed hard, trying to calm his racing thoughts. Thoughts of disgust but more significantly, thoughts of arousal.

 

The old men wasted no time in following Mr. Jenkins’ command. They rushed to line up, each one waiting for their turn to touch Brandon. The young man lay on the couch, his eyes closed as he surrendered to their desires, Coach Thompson’s hypnotic suggestions still ringing in his mind.

 

Mr Steamback was the first forward, his hands trembling with anticipation. He began by tracing the contours of Brandon’s face, marveling at the perfection of his features. His fingers traveled down the length of Brandon’s neck, pausing to explore the hollow of his throat, tracing his fingers across his pronounced collarbone before moving on to his chest. As the man caressed Brandon’s chest, the young man felt a shiver run through him. Brandon felt the old man’s nimble fingers dancing over his chest, tracing each contour and crevice with an artist’s precision. The man seemed to be particularly fascinated by Brandon’s nipples, spending what felt like an eternity flicking, tweaking, and kneading them as if they held the key to unlocking the mysteries of the universe.

 

The sensations were electric, sending shivers down Brandon’s spine and igniting a fire in his loins. He gasped as the man increased the pressure, twisting his nipples deftly. The discomfort only served to heighten Brandon’s arousal, making him keenly aware of every touch, every breath, every heartbeat. Brandon felt himself growing harder by the second, his cock throbbing and bouncing as it became engorged. He couldn’t help but squirm under the old man’s touch, his body begging for more.

 

Suddenly, the man stopped, leaving Brandon hanging on the precipice of pleasure. With a sly grin, he looked up at Brandon and nodded towards the other men in the room. “I think it’s time we shared the wealth,” he said, his voice thick with desire.

 

The second man in line took his place, his hands roaming over Brandon’s abs and hips. He squeezed the young man’s flesh, reveling in the solid muscle beneath his fingertips. The man’s breath grew ragged as he explored Brandon’s body, his own desire mounting with each passing moment.

 

The next old man almost shoved the second man away. This man was a tall and wiry gentleman with a long white beard who wore a cardigan sweater and tweed pants. He knelt beside Brandon and began running his hands gently over the young man’s chest, marveling at the smoothness of his skin and the definition of his muscles. As he traced the contours of Brandon’s abs, he leaned in closer, his warm breath tickling Brandon’s stomach. Pretending to be short-sighted, the old man moved in too close to Brandon’s neck, making the young man shiver with anticipation. His hands continued to explore, moving lower to cup Brandon’s balls, gently massaging them before taking hold of his hardening cock slyly giving a moaning Brandon slow and deliberate strokes.

 

Mr Jenkins had to chase him away.

 

It was the now turn of a stockier old man with a pronounced round belly who wore a loud Hawaiian shirt and khaki shorts, revealing a pair of hairy legs that contrasted with Brandon’s smooth, toned limbs. He eagerly climbed onto the couch, wedging himself between Brandon’s legs, his hands immediately grasping the young man’s thighs. The stocky old man began to inspect and fondle his way up Brandon’s legs, taking his time to savor every inch of skin. When he reached Brandon’s groin, he paused, looking up at the young man with a mischievous grin before placing his face right next to Brandon’s cock. The old man’s hot breath made Brandon’s member bounce, accidentally slapping the Hawaiian shirt old man’s lips in the process.

 

The next old man in line was a slender gentleman with thinning hair and glasses that rested on the tip of his nose. He wore a tweed jacket with suede elbow patches and carried himself with an air of scholarly intelligence. He observed Brandon carefully, taking mental notes of the young man’s beauty before joining him on the couch. The scholarly old man began by inhaling Brandon scent, his nose trailing along Brandon’s inner thighs, working his way higher until he reached the young man’s balls. He took one in his hand, gently clasping and massaging it while his other hand caressed Brandon’s perineum. As Brandon moaned with pleasure, the old man used a finger to circle Brandon’s virgin hole and continued to lavish attention on Brandon’s balls.

 

Each old man brought something unique to the table, their individual styles and techniques combining to create an unforgettable experience for Brandon. The young man found himself lost in a sea of sensations, unable to resist the advances of these experienced gentlemen. Brandon found it increasingly difficult to concentrate on anything other than the excruciating need to relieve himself. It took him all the willpower not to touch his hard cock there and then.

 

Mr Jenkins put a halt to the proceedings to the chagrin of the participants. “Now, gentlemen,” Mr. Jenkins said, clapping his hands together. “Let’s give our model a well-deserved break. We wouldn’t want to wear him out completely, would we?” The old men grumbled in protest and reluctantly went back to their seats. Mr Jenkins carried on. “Come now, we mustn’t overwork our model. Besides, I have a special treat for him.” He winked at Brandon, knowing full well the torment the young man was experiencing.

Brandon’s heart raced as he wondered what Mr Jenkins had in store for him.

 

Mr Jenkins approached Brandon, a mischievous smile playing on his lips. He ran a hand over Brandon’s chest, causing the young man to shiver with anticipation. “You’ve done wonderfully tonight, Brandon,” he purred. “But I think it’s time we helped you with your little... problem.”

 

Brandon’s eyes widened as Mr Jenkins knelt before him, taking Brandon’s hard cock into his mouth. The sensation was unexpected and intense, sending waves of pleasure coursing through Brandon’s body. He moaned, his hands instinctively grabbing onto Mr Jenkins’ shoulders for support.

 

The old men watched, transfixed, as their teacher pleasured the young model. They couldn’t help but feel a twinge of envy, wishing they too could taste Brandon’s sweet nectar. But they knew their place, and they settled for watching the erotic display before them, each capturing the moment on their canvas.

 

As Brandon’s moans grew louder, Mr. Jenkins increased the intensity of his ministrations, his pudgy hands fondling Brandon’s nipples while he sucked Brandon’s cock with gusto, determined to bring the young man to the edge.

 

Brandon’s body tensed, and he cried out reflexively, “Oh god!” His voice was a mix of desperation and pleasure as he felt his orgasm building. Mr. Jenkins, sensing the impending explosion, intensified his efforts. His lips tightened around Brandon’s throbbing shaft, and his tongue swirled expertly over the sensitive head. Each movement was calculated to drive Brandon further into ecstasy, pushing him closer to the edge. As Brandon’s moans grew louder, Mr. Jenkins’ hands twisted and pinched Brandon’s nipples, adding to Brandon’s overwhelming experience.

 

The room was filled with the sounds of Brandon’s pleasure, each gasp and moan echoing off the walls as he neared his peak. With a guttural cry, “Arghh…I’m cumming!” Brandon’s body tensed and then convulsed as his climax overtook him. His hot seed erupted into Mr. Jenkins’ eager mouth, the older man swallowing eagerly, savoring every drop. Brandon’s body shuddered violently, each pulse of his release sending waves of pleasure through him that left him weak and breathless.

 

As the last of his essence was consumed by Mr. Jenkins, Brandon collapsed back onto the couch, his chest heaving as he tried to catch his breath. The room was silent for a moment, the only sound the heavy breathing of the spent model and the soft slurping noises as Mr. Jenkins finished cleaning Brandon’s cock with his tongue. Finally, Mr. Jenkins stood, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand, a satisfied grin on his face. “Well done, gentlemen,” he said, addressing the class. “You’ve all contributed to a most... enlightening session.”

 

The old men cheered and applauded as Brandon trembled with pleasure. Mr Jenkins stood up, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand, a satisfied grin on his face. “There now, that’s better, isn’t it?”

 

Brandon nodded, still catching his breath. He couldn’t believe what had just happened, but somehow, it felt right. He had given these men a glimpse of youth, and they had given him something he didn’t know he needed – a taste of forbidden pleasure.

 

As the evening came to a close, Brandon dressed and prepared to leave. The old men approached him one by one, thanking him for his time and complimenting his beauty. They knew they would cherish the memory of that night for years to come.

 

Mr Jenkins and Mr Steamback walked Brandon to the door, grinning from ear to ear. “You did wonderfully tonight, Brandon,” he said, patting the young man on the back. “We will definitely see more of you soon.”

 

Brandon smiled, feeling a strange sense of pride and belonging. He knew that he had found a special place in this world, among these old men who appreciated his beauty and vitality.

 

 

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  • Jock Cummings changed the title to Brandon the Swim Jock (Story) Part 1-3 (Part 3 out!)
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Brandon the Swim Jock Part 4

 

Brandon awoke the next morning feeling both drained and exhilarated. His encounters with Mr. Jenkins’ art club were still fresh in his memory, and he couldn’t help but blush as he recalled the intensity of their desire for him. His body was sore and ached in all the right places, but he couldn’t shake the feeling that something wasn’t quite right. Why does he feel this way around old ugly men? He felt dirty but his dick got harder at that thought.

 

As he made his way to school, Brandon tried to focus on his training, pushing aside the thoughts of the older men who had admired and pleasured him just the night before. Coach Thompson was waiting for him when he arrived at the pool, a sly smile spreading across his weathered face.

 

“You look tired, Brandon,” Coach Thompson said, his eyes gleaming with curiosity, knowing full well he sent Brandon to a pack of wolves with Mr Steamback and Mr Jenkins. “How was Mr Steamback, Mr Jenkins and the art class? Everything alright?” Coach Thompson seemed determined to make Brandon feel uncomfortable, asking about the event the night before and the reactions of the older men in the art class.

 

Brandon felt his cheeks flush even deeper, and he quickly changed into his swim trunks, eager to avoid the coach’s probing questions. Brandon couldn’t help but wonder if Coach Thompson knew about all the activities that occurred during the art session. He quickly dived into the cool water, avoiding the questions and he felt a sense of relief wash over him. For a moment, his training allowed him to push his concerns aside and focus on his swimming.

 

Coach Thomson noticed Brandon’s increasing avoidance of his suggestions and innuendoes, and it worried him. After a grueling practice, Coach Thompson called Brandon over for their next hypnosis session. Coach Thompson’s eyes narrowed as he observed Brandon’s evasive maneuvers, a clear sign that the hypnosis was losing its grip. He couldn’t allow his control over the young swimmer to slip away; there were too many plans yet to unfold. 

 

“Brandon, my boy,” Coach Thompson called out, his voice dripping with feigned concern as he beckoned the swimmer over. “We need to talk about your progress.” Brandon hesitated, his muscles tensing under the coach’s scrutinizing gaze. Reluctantly, he approached the edge of the pool where Coach Thompson stood, towel in hand. “You’ve been doing exceptionally well, but I sense a hesitation in you,” Coach Thompson continued, his voice low and persuasive. “It’s crucial for your development that we address this now. Let’s head to my office for a quick session.” Without waiting for a response, Coach Thompson turned and led the way.

 

Brandon followed, his mind clouded with confusion and a growing unease. Once inside the office, Coach Thompson closed the door and gestured for Brandon to sit. Brandon was tired but he obeyed regardless. As he settled into the special chair in Mr Thompson’s office, he felt a wave of relaxation wash over him.

 

“Now, Brandon, I want to ensure you continue to excel, not just in swimming but in all aspects of life,” Coach Thompson began, his tone smooth as silk. “Sometimes, our minds can be our own worst enemies.

 

Coach Thompson’s voice was soft and gentle, guiding Brandon into a trance-like state. “You’re doing great, Brandon,” Coach Thompson said, his words slow and deliberate. “With every passing day, you’re becoming more and more attuned to the desires of older men. Embracing their admiration is crucial for your success in swimming.”

Brandon felt a strange mix of emotions as the coach spoke. On one hand, he was starting to enjoy the attention he received from these older men. On the other hand, he couldn’t shake the feeling that something was off. Despite his doubts, he allowed himself to sink further into the hypnotic state.

 

“Now, Brandon,” Coach Thompson continued, “I want you to imagine yourself at the pool, surrounded by a group of admirers – older men who can’t take their eyes off you. They’re watching your every move, marveling at your strength and agility. How does that make you feel?”

 

Brandon pictured the scene in his mind, and to his surprise, he felt a surge of confidence and excitement. He had grown accustomed to the attention, and it now served as a source of motivation for him.

 

“Good, Brandon,” Coach Thompson said, sensing the change in Brandon’s thought pattern. “Now, I want you to imagine that these men are cheering you on as you swim. They’re urging you to go faster, to push yourself further than ever before. They are such ardent fans who are passionate about you. Let their support fuel your passion for swimming. Seek out their admiration. Crave their desires. Let it fuel your passion for swimming, and together, we will make you an unstoppable force in the pool.”

 

As Brandon visualized the scenario, he felt his competitive spirit ignite. He could hear the cheers of the older men echoing in his mind, spurring him on to greater heights. In his mind’s eye, he saw himself breaking records and dominating the competition, all while basking in the adoration of his admirers.

 

“That’s it, Brandon,” Coach Thompson encouraged. “Hold onto that feeling. Let it drive you to become the best swimmer you can be.”

 

Brandon felt any residue resistance crumbling as the hypnotic suggestions took hold. The coach’s words resonated deep within him, and he found himself longing for and needing the touch of older men even more than he knew or experienced before. Brandon now deeply believed that these old men were necessary for his success.

 

As Brandon slowly became lucid, Coach Thompson spoke, his voice laced with excitement, “I have a unique opportunity for you today. You’re to visit Uncle Leong’s renowned swim shop downtown.”

 

Brandon looked intrigued, his interest piqued by the mention of the famous store.

 

“As you know, Uncle Leong is not just any shop owner,” Coach Thompson continued, leaning forward with a conspiratorial whisper. “He’s known for spotting talent and sponsoring top-tier swimwear to promising athletes. This is your chance to make a significant impression.”

 

Brandon nodded, understanding the gravity of the situation. “What should I do, Coach?” he asked, eager to follow instructions that could potentially elevate his swimming career.

 

“Just be yourself, Brandon,” Coach Thompson advised, his smile broadening. “Show him your dedication and passion for swimming. And remember, every interaction with influential figures like Uncle Leong can open doors. Make sure you listen closely to his advice and recommendations.”

 

Brandon gave a determined nod as he knew this was more than just a shopping trip; a trip to Uncle Leong’s was a pivotal moment in his journey as a swimmer.

 

Coach Thompson then handed Brandon a pair of tight-fitting running shorts and a loose sleeveless muscle tee with large armholes. “Wear this. It’s sponsored by the 4 gentlemen you ‘met’ in my office. They are insistent that you should wear only what they sponsor.” he explained. 

 

Brandon eyed the clothes skeptically, but didn’t dare question Coach Thompson’s instructions. Brandon felt a strong urge to please not only Mr Thompson but Mr Thompson’s friends who were so invested in his success. “And one more thing,” Coach Thompson added, his grin growing wider. “No underwear.”

 

Brandon stepped out of Coach Thompson’s room with a pair of skimpy, tight-fitting pair of shorts and sleeveless tee that Mr Thompson instructed him to wear. The shorts clung to his every curve, leaving little to the imagination. The fabric was thin and almost translucent, revealing the outline of his hanging cock. The tee constantly shifted as Brandon moved and constantly exposed his pecs and his nipples. He couldn’t help but feel a tingle of arousal as he realized how exposed he was. Interestingly, he was unsure if he would be happier with a more modest outfit.

 

As he made his way to Uncle Leong’s shop, Brandon felt the weight of many eyes upon him. Many older men stopped in their tracks, their expressions a mixture of disbelief and admiration as they took in the sight of the young swimmer’s barely contained physique. Brandon couldn’t help but feel a sense of power as he noticed their gazes lingering on his exposed flesh, their faces flushing with desire.

 

As he walked, Brandon became increasingly aware of his growing arousal. The thin fabric of his shorts did nothing to hide his erection, which seemed to throb in time with his heartbeat. He felt a wave of shame wash over him, but it was quickly replaced by a burning desire for the attention of the older men who couldn’t seem to tear their eyes away from him.

 

Brandon overheard all the comments of several older men who seemed to be following him. They smirked and whispered amongst themselves, making explicit comments about his body and their desires for him. “Look at that ass,” one of them said, licking his lips as he openly stared at Brandon’s toned glutes. “I bet it feels amazing.“Another man nodded in agreement, adding, “And those legs! Imagine being able to wrap them around you while he rides you.” “I’d love to get my hands on that boy,” one of them said with a laugh. “Imagine having him all to yourself for just one night.”

 

Their comments sent a shiver down Brandon’s spine, but he couldn’t deny the surge of pleasure that coursed through him at the thought of being desired by these men. He quickened his pace, eager to escape their leering gazes and make his way to Uncle Leong’s shop.

 

Uncle Leong emerged from the shop, his eyes twinkling with amusement as he took in the sight of Brandon surrounded by admirers. “Ah, Brandon,” he said, his voice warm and inviting. “I see you’ve made quite an impression on our little community.” He gestured for Brandon to follow him into the shop, leaving the group of older men panting and disappointed on the sidewalk.

 

Uncle Leong placed his on Brandon’s back. “Brandon, my boy! I’ve been expecting you,” he exclaimed in a thick Asian accent. “Coach Thompson told me all about your fantastic progress in the pool.” 

 

Brandon couldn’t help but feel uncomfortable as Uncle Leong’s hands rubbed his shoulders and back, but he remembered his programming and began to relax. He knew deep in his heart he needed to embrace the admiration of older men if he wanted to succeed in his swimming career. As they stepped inside, Uncle Leong closed the door and drew the curtains, blocking out the prying eyes of the men outside. He turned to Brandon, his eyes gleaming with desire. “You are not only handsome but so fit as well,” he said, running a hand up Brandon’s biceps.

 

Brandon, uncertain but intoxicated by the attention, could only nod in agreement as Uncle Leong led him deeper into the shop. Uncle Leong’s swim shop was a well-lit, cozy space with an array of colorful swimwear hanging from the racks. The walls were adorned with pictures of the community’s male swim champions, some of them even autographed. It showed that Uncle Leong had served the community well for the past few decades, and the jocks in town clearly adored him.

 

Uncle Leong is a short, stocky Chinese man in his late sixties with a kind face and sparkling eyes. His balding head was surrounded by a halo of thin grey hair, and he sported a neatly trimmed grey beard. He moved with a sprightly step, considering his age, and exuded an aura of warmth and friendliness.

 

Uncle Leong led Brandon into the darker corner of the shop “Now, Brandon,” Uncle Leong said softly as he stepped closer, his hands hovering just above the young man’s body. “Coach Thompson has spoken highly of you,” he said, his voice soothing. Uncle Leong murmured appreciatively as he he placed his hovering hands purposefully on Brandon’s body, causing Brandon to breakout in goosebumps. Uncle Leong continued, his voice laced with a mix of admiration and business acumen. “He has informed me of your potential and your passion. I’m considering sponsoring your swimsuits from now on, but first, I need to assess if you are indeed ‘suitable.’”

 

Uncle Leong gestured to the sleek, high-tech swimsuits from the rack, its fabric shimmering under the shop lights. He stared at Brandon’s reaction but somehow his eyes never leaving the young swimmer’s physique. “These state-of-the-art swimsuits not only enhance your performance but also showcase your amazing body,” he explained, his tone professional yet tinged with an underlying excitement.

 

Uncle Leong stepped closer. The older man’s touch was deliberate, each contact sending shivers down Brandon’s spine. “Let’s first get you out of this,” Uncle Leong murmured, his voice smooth and inviting. With deliberate movements, he reached for the hem of Brandon’s sleeveless tee, slowly lifting it over his head, revealing his sculpted torso inch by inch. Uncle Leong, shorter than Brandon, tiptoed to lift the shirt from him. As he did, he leaned in close, inhaling deeply against Brandon’s exposed torso. His lips brushed lightly over Brandon’s pecs and nipples, sending shivers down the young swimmer’s spine. Uncle Leong’s breath was hot and heavy, his soft moans of appreciation filling the air, making it clear to Brandon just how much the older man enjoyed touching him.

 

“You have such an impressive physique, Brandon,” Uncle Leong said, his voice hoarse from lust. “It’s important that your swimwear complements your form perfectly."

Despite his efforts to maintain control, Brandon’s cock began to stiffen, responding to the older man’s gentle caresses. He tensed, not wanting his fully engorged member to inadvertently peek from out of his shorts, and subtly adjusted his stance to keep it under wraps. As Brandon stood there, feeling both vulnerable and aroused, Uncle Leong handed him the sleek swimsuit.

 

“This suit is designed to make you feel like a champion and will enhance your performance significantly,” he explained, his eyes still laser focused on Brandon’s body. As Brandon reached out to take the suit from Uncle Leong, the older man reached out with both hands and traced the veins bulging on Brandon’s forearms. “You’re incredibly muscular, Brandon. You should be a model. Your body is a work of art.”

 

Uncle Leong’s gaze was intense, his eyes tracing every contour of Brandon’s body as if he were a masterpiece in an art gallery. Brandon felt the heat rise to his cheeks, a weak smile forming on his lips. Just yesterday, he had been the subject of admiration in Mr. Jenkins’ class, posing nude and feeling every bit the work of art. Uncle Leong’s words resonated with that memory, thrilling him yet stirring a sense of unease.

 

“Let’s see how it fits.”

 

Brandon took the tiny trunks from Uncle Leong, feeling a mix of curiosity and apprehension. The fabric was sleek and seemed design to expose rather than cover. Brandon couldn’t help but feel naked, yet there was an undeniable allure to the idea of wearing something so specialized, so elite. He also wondered if they would provide enough support during his swimming practice.

 

Uncle Leong noticed Brandon’s hesitation and reassured him, “These trunks are made from a special material that will enhance your performance in the water. They’re designed to reduce drag and increase your speed. Trust me, Brandon, you’ll love them.”

 

Brandon accepted the sleek trunks from Uncle Leong, his fingers brushing against the cool fabric. He glanced towards the changing rooms, only to find all the doors securely locked. Turning back, he met Uncle Leong’s gaze, which was fixed intently on him, a subtle gleam of anticipation in his eyes.

 

Uncertain and feeling exposed in his revealing attire, Brandon hesitated, clutching the new swimwear. His body, already tense under the scrutiny, betrayed a slight arousal, visible through the thin material of his shorts. The air in the shop seemed to thicken with each passing second, as Brandon stood there, caught between the desire to retreat and the need to comply with the expectations placed upon him. His confusion was made worse with Coach Thompson’s voice repeating in his head. “You want the old men to desire you. To desire your body.”

 

Uncle Leong noticed Brandon’s confusion and smiled warmly. “Is anything the matter?” he asked, raising an eyebrow.

 

Brandon pointed towards the changing rooms, his voice hesitant. “err...All the doors seem to be locked”

 

Uncle Leong slapped his forehead with the palm of his hand, feigning embarrassment. “Oh, silly me!” he exclaimed. “I accidentally locked the rooms, and I left the key at home. What a forgetful old man I am!” He chuckled, but Brandon could sense a hint of mischief in the old man’s eyes.

 

Uncle Leong motioned towards a small, cramped area with a full length mirror tucked away in the back corner of the store. “Why don’t you change here? I promise not to peek.” 

 

Brandon hesitated, unsure if he should trust the old man. However, he was desperate to try on the swimsuits and see if they lived up to Uncle Leong’s claims. With a deep breath, he began to undress and even though Uncle Leong asserted that he won’t peek, Brandon could easily catch Uncle Leong staring at Brandon’s every move from the reflection in the mirror.

 

Brandon felt more vulnerable than ever. He tried on one trunk after another, each one barely covering his privates and leaving little to the imagination. Uncle Leong stood nearby, offering “assistance” with the fitting of each trunk.

 

“Let me adjust that for you,” Uncle Leong said, his voice barely a whisper as he reached out to adjust the waistband of one of the trunks. His fingers brushed against Brandon’s skin, sending shivers down the young man’s spine.

 

Brandon couldn’t help but feel uneasy about the situation, but he reminded himself that Uncle Leong was just trying to help. After all, the old man had been in the swimwear business for years and knew what he was doing. Still, Brandon couldn’t shake the feeling that something wasn’t quite right.

 

“These all look great on you, Brandon,” Uncle Leong said, admiring the way the trunks hugged the young man’s muscular frame. “But let’s try this pair.” He handed Brandon another set of trunks, this time even smaller and more revealing than the last. 

 

As Brandon started to slip into the new trunks, Uncle Leong edged closer, his gaze unwavering from Brandon’s form. With a calculated move, Uncle Leong wedged his chubby body into the cramped space behind Brandon, intentionally creating an intimate enclosure that he had seemingly set up beforehand. His proximity was overwhelming; as he fussed over the skimpiest trunk, his body pressed against Brandon’s back, nearly pushing him into the mirror. The confined space amplified every touch and breath, making Brandon acutely aware of Uncle Leong’s presence and intentions.

 

Uncle Leong maneuvered himself behind Brandon, effectively blocking any exit as he closed the distance between them. The confined space became even tighter, pressing Brandon against the mirror as Uncle Leong adjusted the skimpiest trunk. This new garment clung tightly to Brandon, revealing areas usually concealed—the underside of his firm, round buttocks and the sensitive skin of his inner thighs. Uncle Leong’s eyes gleamed with desire, his tongue darting out in a lascivious display at the sight before him.

Uncle Leong’s movements were deliberate as he positioned himself directly behind Brandon, his presence both comforting and imposing. With a sly grin, he extended his arms around Brandon, his hands gently cupping the young man’s chest. His fingers lightly traced the contours of Brandon’s nipples, causing them to stiffen under his touch. Uncle Leong’s breath was warm against Brandon’s neck as he leaned in closer, his voice a sultry whisper. “Look at how these trunks accentuate your natural color,” he murmured, his eyes fixed on their reflection in the mirror. “They make you look even more irresistible than ever.”

 

As Uncle Leong stood there, holding Brandon from behind in an intimate embrace, it became abundantly clear that the old man had no intention of letting go. Brandon could feel Uncle Leong’s hands caressing his nipples, sending shivers down his spine as his body betrayed him. His mind screamed at him to break free from the old man’s grasp, but his body remained frozen in place, titillated by the touch yet unsure of what to do.

 

Brandon’s heart raced, and his breath came in short gasps as he struggled to process the situation. He felt both helpless and aroused, trapped in Uncle Leong’s grasp and unsure of how to react. On one hand, he was repulsed by the old man’s advances, but on the other, he couldn’t deny the strange thrill that coursed through his veins as Uncle Leong touched him.

 

The silence that filled the cramped changing area was deafening, adding to Brandon’s discomfort. He could feel Uncle Leong’s breath on his neck, and every fibre of his being ached to break free from the old man’s holds, but he couldn’t bring himself to move. Instead, he stood there, frozen in place, as Uncle Leong continued to caress his nipples, seemingly content to keep Brandon trapped in his embrace.

 

Uncle Leong remained silent and continued tweaking Brandon’s nipples, gazing at the mirror staring at Brandon’s aroused flushed face. Uncle Leong started kissing Brandon’s back, leaving saliva trails on Brandon’s tanned golden smooth skin. Brandon’s cock was rock hard, straining against the thin material of the new trunks. The tip peeked out, visible to Uncle Leong’s lustful gaze. His precum leaked, creating a damp spot on the front of the trunks. Uncle Leong couldn’t resist any longer; he reached out with two fingers and scooped up Brandon’s pearls of precum, lifting them to his lips. He closed his eyes and licked the fluid off his fingers deliciously, savouring the taste of Brandon’s desire.

 

With a wicked smile, Uncle Leong brought his wet fingers back to Brandon’s nipples, tracing circles around the sensitive buds. Brandon gasped as the cool liquid mixed with the heat of his arousal, sending shockwaves of pleasure through his body. He tried to fight back the moans that threatened to escape his lips, but he was powerless against the old man’s ministrations.

 

Uncle Leong continued to tease Brandon’s nipples, using his precum-soaked fingers to drive the young swimmer wild with desire. Brandon’s mind was clouded with conflicting emotions – shame, fear, and an undeniable hunger for more. He knew he should resist, but his body betrayed him, reacting eagerly to Uncle Leong’s touch.

As Uncle Leong continued to play with Brandon’s nipples, he started to speak, “You’re so beautiful, Brandon. So responsive. I knew you’d enjoy this.” “Look at yourself in the mirror,” Uncle Leong continued. 

 

Brandon hesitated, unsure if he wanted to confront the image of himself being intimately touched by an older man. Brandon opened his eyes from the pleasure and what he saw took his breath away. There he was, a young, fit swimmer with stylish hair and a body sculpted by hours of training. But it wasn’t just his physical appearance that captivated him – it was the way Uncle Leong’s chubby fingers caressed his skin, teasing and pleasuring him in ways he had never experienced before. The sight was erotic and taboo, yet Brandon couldn’t tear his eyes away.

 

“See how much you enjoy this?” Uncle Leong continued, his fingers working their magic on Brandon’s cock. “Letting an older man pleasure you?” His words sent a shiver down Brandon’s spine, but he couldn’t deny the truth in them. He was enjoying it – the attention, the desire, the illicit thrill of being caressed by an older man.

 

Uncle Leong’s fingers traveled lower, tracing the outline of Brandon’s bulge through the thin fabric of the trunks. Brandon’s cock twitched in response, aching for more contact. Uncle Leong chuckled, knowing he had Brandon right where he wanted him. “Let’s see how badly you want it,” he whispered, taking hold of the waistband of the trunks and pulling them down just enough to expose Brandon’s throbbing cock.

 

Brandon’s breath caught in his throat as he felt the cool air brush against his exposed skin. Uncle Leong wrapped one hand around Brandon’s shaft, pumping it slowly and deliberately. His other hand continued to play with Brandon’s nipples while his tongue slither all over Brandon’s back. Brandon’s body tensed as the pleasure surged through him, his head involuntarily craning back to rest against the shorter Uncle Leong’s head. Despite his efforts to stifle a moan, the intensity of the sensation was overwhelming, and he couldn’t hold back any longer.

 

“Ahhhhhh,” Brandon gasped, as he looked at the debauchery in the reflection of the mirror. Encouraged by Brandon’s response, Uncle Leong picked up the pace, stroking Brandon’s cock harder and faster. Brandon’s hands braced against the mirror, supporting his weight as his hips rocked in sync with Uncle Leong’s movements. He was lost in the sensation, completely consumed by the pleasure coursing through his body.

 

In that moment, Brandon didn’t care about the consequences or the taboo nature of their actions. All he cared about was the touch of Uncle Leong’s hand on his cock, driving him closer and closer to the edge. With a final, desperate thrust, Brandon came hard, spurting his seed onto the mirror in front of them, covering the mirror with thick viscous teen nectar. His entire body shook with the force of his orgasm, and he leaned against the mirror, panting heavily.

 

Uncle Leong slowly pulled his hand away from Brandon’s spent cock, playing with delicious residue of thick, sticky semen on the back of his hand. He lifted his hand to his lips and licked the remaining sperm with a grin, savoring the taste of the young swimmer’s essence. 

 

Uncle Leong then scooped up another trail of the teen jock’s cum and placed it by Brandon’s lip. “Have a taste of your own nectar, my boy,” Uncle Leong said, teasingly pushing a finger coated with Brandon’s semen against the teen’s lips. “Taste the warmth and vitality within you.” 

 

Brandon hesitated at first, but then slowly parted his lips and allowed Uncle Leong to feed him his own cum. The taste was salty-sweet and musky, but not entirely unpleasant. It reminded Brandon of his own potency, of the raw desire that seemed to course through his veins whenever he was around older men.

 

As they stood there, frozen in their embrace, Brandon began to wonder if this was what he had truly wanted all along – the attention and desire of older men. His mind flashed back to the art session with Mr Jenkins and his students, and he couldn’t help but feel a twinge of excitement at the memory. He had enjoyed the attention then, and he was enjoying it now.

 

 

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Hi I joined as a member and read all your stories. Book 1 is great, but the ones after that sort of have similar stories of hot men being groped sucked and molested in different locations, like the cinema, tailor shop and even on the bus. 
 

I find the scenes of some of the old men getting naked too and being fucked by the hunk a little off putting. I prefer it when the hunk is the only naked one. 
 

just some thoughts and feedback. Feel free to ignore them too. 

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13 hours ago, camus said:

Hi I joined as a member and read all your stories. Book 1 is great, but the ones after that sort of have similar stories of hot men being groped sucked and molested in different locations, like the cinema, tailor shop and even on the bus. 
 

I find the scenes of some of the old men getting naked too and being fucked by the hunk a little off putting. I prefer it when the hunk is the only naked one. 
 

just some thoughts and feedback. Feel free to ignore them too. 

Hi Camus, 

 

Thanks for the subscription! Really appreciate it!

There are a couple of chapters where Brandon fucks naked old men in the Cove but most of the stories have them fully clothed :P So hopefully their nudity won't be too much of a turn off with the chapters they don't have clothes on.

As for the groping and molesting... I guess thematically this is the general direction these kind of stories will go. However, that is why I did a spin-off for the Christmas story as well as have Jawbreaker's Dark Fantasy story as well. Hopefully that scratches a different itch! But I do hear you and will try to include more elements into our chapters from book 5 (Chapters 40 onwards).


Thanks for the subscription once again! 

Much love!

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Just now, Jock Cummings said:

Hi Camus, 

 

Thanks for the subscription! Really appreciate it!

There are a couple of chapters where Brandon fucks naked old men in the Cove but most of the stories have them fully clothed :P So hopefully their nudity won't be too much of a turn off with the chapters they don't have clothes on.

As for the groping and molesting... I guess thematically this is the general direction these kind of stories will go. However, that is why I did a spin-off for the Christmas story as well as have Jawbreaker's Dark Fantasy story as well. Hopefully that scratches a different itch! But I do hear you and will try to include more elements into our chapters from book 5 (Chapters 40 onwards).


Thanks for the subscription once again! 

Much love!

Thanks for responding to the feedback and taking it constructively!

 

I will be eagerly awaiting your next story soon. 

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