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Anyone Like To Read Online Gay Novel At Nifty? (X Rated)

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I like to read book /Novel, includes reading Gay Novel, or you can call it a jerk-off stories.

There's tons of cheesy Jerk-off Stories at www.nifty.org

But I only goes for the best story writing and those deep novel that not just rush into sex.

My favorite is to read the High-school/College stories that involve the conversion of straight guy and start exploring his gay side during school/college. And of course all of the stories have good look & hot body.

Please share if you guys also have a good stories that I need to know.

Here's my Recommendation: (Based on my favorite)

1. Dumb (Short Stories, High-school, High Quality, Romance)

The Smart-skinny-Marcel always beaten up by his handsome-macho-high-school-jock-Tim, who is manipulated by Nicholas. Things start to turn around, when Marcel need to tutor Tim one-on-one everyday privately after school.

This is a very high quality writing. When you read this novel, it seems like you are watching a movie. Very good Intro, Nice Plot, Good Dialogue, very good Anti-Climax toward the end of the story, and a heart-warming epilogue. And yeah, there is an antagonist in this little romance story; Something you wont find in other jerk-off stories.

http://www.nifty.org...highschool/dumb

2. The Brotherhood (Tag: 20 Chapter ongoing, College, Fraternity, Romance, Fiction, High quality)

There this prestigious fraternity in this college called "The Brotherhood" very mysterious and only good looking bro can join into brotherhood. Jacob ready to giving up all to join 'The Brotherhood', and he never expect that the Brothers asks him to do weird tasks that he never expect to do. Very high quality writing, that nonetheless will make you hard in between chapter. The Author have a follower of 6000ppl in yahoo groups. You can imagine there will be another TV series like "Queer as Folk" out from this series, i hope...

http://www.nifty.org...he-brotherhood/

3. Cupid Big Weekends (Short Stories, College, Threesome, Exploration)

This is very unusual story. Because at the end, the main character are not together with his crush. But yet helping his crush "straight friend" to discover that male-love is possible between two guy. Beautiful Story, and the ending very touching.

http://www.nifty.org...ids-big-weekend

4. Under The Fig Tree (Short Stories, College, Romance, Exploration, denial)

Beautiful story about a beautiful straight athlete who fall in love with his bestfriend boyfriend.

http://www.nifty.org...er-the-fig-tree

5. The List (Tag: 23 Chapter ongoing, College, anal, oral, romance)

This is a very horny college guy who have luck with guys every chapter he fxxk a new guy, and he make a list of name out of it. and found romance out of it. Easy to follow stories. Never failed to make you hard every chapter.

http://www.nifty.org...llege/the-list/

6. Frat House Troopers (Short-Stories, College, cops, buddies, Straight convert)

Brandt is a straight 24yo Police Officer. He have no problem to go in any dangerous undercover job involving penetrating Mafia's gank, drug dealer etc. But not this job. not this case. This will become his hardest mission ever, when he was given a task to investigate a house full of frat college students who record themselves on video and sell it on a website. (Remember something like fratmen.com?) Yes, not just a casual recording, these horny straight college studs are record themselves jacking off in front of camera and sell it in a website for a mainly gay audience. sounds familiar huh?

And officer Brandt task is pretty simple: 1) To look hot and desirable, so they will hire him. 2) Jerk off in front of camera watched by thousands of ppl. 3) Investigate the website's owner who run the house.

There were hilarious moment when he & his partner need to make a trip to a famous gay district to shop for a sexy undies & hot carpenter costumes.

Highly recommended! :P

http://www.nifty.org...-house-troopers

PROLIFIC AUTHOR:

1. Stories by Bill Fore

He's the master of 'First Encounters of A Close Kind". The best of all stories that involve conversion from Straight dude to Gay.

http://www.nifty.org...iends/doug-vent

http://www.nifty.org...t-physical-exam

http://www.nifty.org...e-clothes-model

http://www.nifty.org...lt-friends/lyon

http://www.nifty.org...lt-youth/robbie

http://www.nifty.org...d-football-hero

2. Stories by Adam Phillip: Crosscurrents (32 Chapters ongoing, friendship, bisexual, teen, drama, romance)

Andy and Matt, best friends and teammates from childhood, grow together, learn together, and struggle to remain friends when their evolving relationship outpaces their ability to understand it.

Warning, there's a bisexual action going on in the beginning, but it help to build the story toward the exploration of gay. Beautiful story indeed.

http://www.gayauthor...s/crosscurrents

That's about it.

Will update soon, after I discover another stories.

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The link that you provided is not working or is it my computer lor.. :huh:

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I read the stories from Nifty too. I don't like the stories that go on for chapter after chapter - I would rather the writer decide on the plot, then write. I find it irritating to read a story one or two pages long that does not quite end - and then I have to wait a month or so before the writer continues with another segment which does not end either.

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1. Dumb (Short Stories, High-school, High Quality, Romance) shared by playfulsg is so damn romantic sia :)

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i thought i was the only 1 reading from nifty... haha! cos plu gave me a general impression of going for videos instead of words... guess i m wrong... haha!

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I read the stories from Nifty too. I don't like the stories that go on for chapter after chapter - I would rather the writer decide on the plot, then write. I find it irritating to read a story one or two pages long that does not quite end - and then I have to wait a month or so before the writer continues with another segment which does not end either.

I believe people do have preferences. The stories that I share above are really a story with a very good plot. it really goes on chapter by chapter because it takes long to build the sstoryline. But If you don't want to wait, i suggest the story "Dumb" and "cupid big weekend" :P

1. Dumb (Short Stories, High-school, High Quality, Romance) shared by playfulsg is so damn romantic sia :)

Nice right? :) It's my favorite too.

The link that you provided is not working or is it my computer lor.. :huh:

I've tested all the links and it working. Maybe you can try again in different computer? :P

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Thank you playfulsg! Before this, I would always wonder was <3 is but after I read dumb( after u recommended it), i truly really understand was it really is!!! The story has stirred my emotions and brought tears to my eyes!!! Too bad it's a fiction.

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It has been my favourite web since i was 16!!

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i didn't know about such stories. Thanks for the recommendations! :-)

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Used to read at ASSGM when I was young... then one faithful day they decided to close it up for member only... then couldn't find a good erotic stories site for a while until I met nifty, been sticking to the site ever since lol... good that the poster shares this site out :)

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I read them a lot last time. I love Dave's Initiation. It's a very long story but never failed to bring tears to my eye and cum to my fingers. :thumb:

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One of my favourite past time, actually tried writing stories of my own as well, I think it is damn erotic to write your own, always ended up jerking off but haven't finish writing. Any keen to write too?

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Thanks guys! Actually,

The BRotherhood is also very good! very romantic.

but i cant tell much coz it will spoilt the plot. haha

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One of my favourite past time, actually tried writing stories of my own as well, I think it is damn erotic to write your own, always ended up jerking off but haven't finish writing. Any keen to write too?

Haha i tried to write before, but its not a jerk off story, is an adventure kind of movie.

And I also draw comic last time

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playfulsg u should not have posted this tread. It's all your fault that I am hooked on reading the stories (Hugs). I never knew that they can be so romantic haha although I am not the romantic sort of guy.

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I only read the story "dumb" and it reminded me so much of my own love.

Thanks for the intro.

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http://www.nifty.org...ids-initiation/

David's Initiation

A very LONG story about a guy name David (nicknamed Dave) as he grows up from a kid, to highschool, experience life, trying his best, till the end of his life.

I am a bad summariser but this story is very heart-wrenching and heart-warming.

It's very long but it is in parts. I hope you guys can enjoy it, I have enjoyed it a lot. Cried a lot, and ahemed a lot. I would produce it as a drama if I could. Enjoy (:

P.S. You can at least read the front part, it's pretty jerkable at first as it wasn't meant to be such a long story. But it became one, and I am so very glad.

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HAHA i used to read Nifty, but stop after awhile. not sure why.

But "Dumb" is a good story! hahaha! so interesting (and unusual) that there was an antagonist in it! A very nice love story.

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Used to read from this website quite a bit, move the files to my handphone so that I can read it for major hard-ons even when I have parents around.

But haven't been visiting this site for quite a long time, I have become a very visual person in the past few years, you may say. Lol. Think I'm gonna read some of the stories (i.e. Dave, Dumb) 'coz all your raving reviews, certainly need some tears in my eyes and cum on my fingers lol.

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2. The Brotherhood (Tag: 20 Chapter ongoing, College, Fraternity, Romance, Fiction, High quality) shared by playfulsg is super good as well, but it seems like u are stopped while u are about to climax :)

Finished 20 chapthers in less than 2 days haha, with 4 hours of sleep at night of cos

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I am quite sticky rice...i would enjoy asian or local stories much more. Its just my taste i guess.

Good site for some alternate literature :smokin: Thnx for sharing :thumb:

Never endorsed any war or violence but since i m into uniformz...i would certainly enjoy some stories about cute

Japanese soldiers escapades in ww2 :oops: :oops: or encounters of raping the enemy soldiers. :oops: :oops:

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Joined brotherhood yahoo group yesterday and realised that chapter 21 is already realsed in yahoo group :)

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Thank you guys!!

Glad to know that I'm not the only one who enjoy reading stories.

Haha. been there done that, including loading stories into phone, and reading nonstop without sleep.

I KNEW exactly what you've going through. hahaha.

Joined brotherhood yahoo group yesterday and realised that chapter 21 is already realsed in yahoo group :)

Yess, I do suggest you all join the yahoo group so you can read earlier chapter than nifty. :P

2. The Brotherhood (Tag: 20 Chapter ongoing, College, Fraternity, Romance, Fiction, High quality) shared by playfulsg is super good as well, but it seems like u are stopped while u are about to climax :)

Finished 20 chapthers in less than 2 days haha, with 4 hours of sleep at night of cos

Hahaha... The brotherhood is super good i tell you. my favorite, until i found "Dumb".

Used to read from this website quite a bit, move the files to my handphone so that I can read it for major hard-ons even when I have parents around.

But haven't been visiting this site for quite a long time, I have become a very visual person in the past few years, you may say. Lol. Think I'm gonna read some of the stories (i.e. Dave, Dumb) 'coz all your raving reviews, certainly need some tears in my eyes and cum on my fingers lol.

Please read dumb and the brotherhood. definitely u cant stop. haha

Thanks for sharing bro. I will read it soon!

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Try this blog- asiandaydreaming.blogspot.com

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Guys,

I have a NEW stories that super solid, and quickly become my favorites!!!

Title: Frat House Troopers (Short-Stories, College, cops, buddies, Straight convert)

Brandt is a straight 24yo Police Officer. He's used to be in any dangerous undercover job involving penetrating Mafia's gank, drug dealer etc. But not this job. not this case. This will become his hardest mission ever, when he was given a task to investigate a house full of frat college students who record themselves on video and sell it on a website. (Remember something like fratmen.com?) Yes, not just a casual recording, these horny straight college studs are record themselves jacking off in front of camera and sell it in a website for a mainly gay audience. sounds familiar huh?

And officer Brandt task is pretty simple: 1) To look hot and desirable, so they will hire him. 2) Jerk off in front of camera watched by thousands of ppl. 3) Investigate the website's owner who run the house.

There were hilarious moment when he & his partner need to make a trip to a famous gay district to shop for a sexy undies & hot carpenter costumes.

Highly recommended! :P

http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/beginnings/frat-house-troopers

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you can try gay camp ground under the camping outdoors section. i think thats damn erotic also

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nifty.org... it has been a while... haha. thanks for reminding me of its existence. shall check out your recommended stories (:

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I like to read book /Novel, includes reading Gay Novel, or you can call it a jerk-off stories.

There's tons of cheesy Jerk-off Stories at www.nifty.org

But I only goes for the best story writing and those deep novel that not just rush into sex.

My favorite is to read the High-school/College stories that involve the conversion of straight guy and start exploring his gay side during school/college. And of course all of the stories have good look & hot body.

Please share if you guys also have a good stories that I need to know.

Here's my Recommendation: (Based on my favorite)

1. Dumb (Short Stories, High-school, High Quality, Romance)

The Smart-skinny-Marcel always beaten up by his handsome-macho-high-school-jock-Tim, who is manipulated by Nicholas. Things start to turn around, when Marcel need to tutor Tim one-on-one everyday privately after school.

This is a very high quality writing. When you read this novel, it seems like you are watching a movie. Very good Intro, Nice Plot, Good Dialogue, very good Anti-Climax toward the end of the story, and a heart-warming epilogue. And yeah, there is an antagonist in this little romance story; Something you wont find in other jerk-off stories.

http://www.nifty.org...highschool/dumb

2. The Brotherhood (Tag: 20 Chapter ongoing, College, Fraternity, Romance, Fiction, High quality)

There this prestigious fraternity in this college called "The Brotherhood" very mysterious and only good looking bro can join into brotherhood. Jacob ready to giving up all to join 'The Brotherhood', and he never expect that the Brothers asks him to do weird tasks that he never expect to do. Very high quality writing, that nonetheless will make you hard in between chapter. The Author have a follower of 6000ppl in yahoo groups. You can imagine there will be another TV series like "Queer as Folk" out from this series, i hope...

http://www.nifty.org...he-brotherhood/

3. Cupid Big Weekends (Short Stories, College, Threesome, Exploration)

This is very unusual story. Because at the end, the main character are not together with his crush. But yet helping his crush "straight friend" to discover that male-love is possible between two guy. Beautiful Story, and the ending very touching.

http://www.nifty.org...ids-big-weekend

4. Under The Fig Tree (Short Stories, College, Romance, Exploration, denial)

Beautiful story about a beautiful straight athlete who fall in love with his bestfriend boyfriend.

http://www.nifty.org...er-the-fig-tree

5. The List (Tag: 23 Chapter ongoing, College, anal, oral, romance)

This is a very horny college guy who have luck with guys every chapter he fxxk a new guy, and he make a list of name out of it. and found romance out of it. Easy to follow stories. Never failed to make you hard every chapter.

http://www.nifty.org...llege/the-list/

6. Frat House Troopers (Short-Stories, College, cops, buddies, Straight convert)

Brandt is a straight 24yo Police Officer. He have no problem to go in any dangerous undercover job involving penetrating Mafia's gank, drug dealer etc. But not this job. not this case. This will become his hardest mission ever, when he was given a task to investigate a house full of frat college students who record themselves on video and sell it on a website. (Remember something like fratmen.com?) Yes, not just a casual recording, these horny straight college studs are record themselves jacking off in front of camera and sell it in a website for a mainly gay audience. sounds familiar huh?

And officer Brandt task is pretty simple: 1) To look hot and desirable, so they will hire him. 2) Jerk off in front of camera watched by thousands of ppl. 3) Investigate the website's owner who run the house.

There were hilarious moment when he & his partner need to make a trip to a famous gay district to shop for a sexy undies & hot carpenter costumes.

Highly recommended! :P

http://www.nifty.org...-house-troopers

PROLIFIC AUTHOR:

1. Stories by Bill Fore

He's the master of 'First Encounters of A Close Kind". The best of all stories that involve conversion from Straight dude to Gay.

http://www.nifty.org...iends/doug-vent

http://www.nifty.org...t-physical-exam

http://www.nifty.org...e-clothes-model

http://www.nifty.org...lt-friends/lyon

http://www.nifty.org...lt-youth/robbie

http://www.nifty.org...d-football-hero

2. Stories by Adam Phillip: Crosscurrents (32 Chapters ongoing, friendship, bisexual, teen, drama, romance)

Andy and Matt, best friends and teammates from childhood, grow together, learn together, and struggle to remain friends when their evolving relationship outpaces their ability to understand it.

Warning, there's a bisexual action going on in the beginning, but it help to build the story toward the exploration of gay. Beautiful story indeed.

http://www.gayauthor...s/crosscurrents

That's about it.

Will update soon, after I discover another stories.

Hi playfulsg,

Thanks for sharing the novel. I really enjoy the "The BrotherHood" . It's really romantic other then the lust parts. Nice sharring.

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Just finished reading Dumb.... Gosh, if you can put yourself in the shoes of the protagonists, you'd be able to cry and laugh along with them... I think it is a story about 2nd chances. About how when given a 2nd chance, a high school bully can become the most romantic lover.... That given a 2nd chance, an evil and scheming person too has a benevolent side to him. And given a chance, even an epileptic dog can prove to be an object of great affection. The ending wasn't all anti-climax; it was beautiful and tells of hope and a new future awaiting everybody.

Was like many years since I last read anything from Nifty. Now I find myself downloading the stories, converting them into PDF files for reading on my phone. ^_^ Thanks to playfulsg for the recommendation. :thumb:

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I've been reading Nifty Erotic for years.Yes they're nice. We can even send in our own stories.

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I was wondering if anyone else here read the nifty archive. Great to find this thread so I can share what I've found and find more material. It's now a habit of mine to check it out every night for some jerk off material.

I'm currently reading a series of stories by "Kneeler4Jock". Started off with Pledging the Jock Frat (common frat. fantasy storyline, but fairly well written and to the point), then moved on to My Neighbor's Husband and going to start on Roberto.

My personal favorite series is Football House, which is different because of the considerably different perspective it presents. Many stories pair a somewhat geeky / ostracized gay guy who eventually hooks up with a jock. This one presents a real-life narration (or so the author claims at least) of jocks getting together, which is not so common on Nifty. Wrestlers Love the Kamikaze Shack is a more humorous take on the whole jock-jock thing, but fictional. The movie names are hilarious!

I sometimes dive deep into the archive when I can't find anything interesting in the latest posts. One great one I found was Getting In Too Deep. The author, "Ruthless", seems to write on very varied topics, and I notice he (she?) writes some transgender stories as well. I browsed through his stories, and found the very nice if somewhat bittersweet story Life After Burke.

One of the more promising writers on Nifty I've seen recently is "John Smith (krazytop)". His story Favor is extremely well written with a nice touch of continuity with Sasha's scissors through the chapters. I followed up with another of his stories, My Well Bred Friend, and yeah he definitely has a penchant for teasing his readers by threatening to derail the gay plot.

I've read alot more in the past several years... too many to count, and almost diligently every night ever since I discovered the archive, as well as Gay authors and a little of literotica. I'll post here when I find more interesting stuff. Will definitely check out "Dumb" since it seems well recommended by most here.

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Finished Frat House Troopers just yesterday. Cool story, fulfil some naughty fantasies about those pxxn stars lol.

I was reading Dumb earlier tonight, initially planned to read just a part of it on my iPhone then went to sleep; then some of the parts sent shiver down my spine and I was like "Fvck it! I'm gonna turn on the light on and finish this whole chunk on my computer right now. LOL." Intense, so romantic and the Dumb guy seems hot... I just can envision him lol. (Skipped a few parts, though, haha. I'm just very impatient sorry. =x)

Now I'm not even sure if I'm going back to bed or gonna start another story lol.

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I read Dumb, and it's definitely one of the best written stories I've ever come across on Nifty. Although it takes a very common base storyline (nerd tutors jock and they both fall in love), the author injects in a lot of attention to detail and fleshes out the characters (families and friends) very carefully. I like that a lot of attention is paid in the details of the interests and hobbies of the characters (e.g. Marcel's interest in Astronomy) and the elaboration in how Marcel finds ways to tutor Tim.

Definitely a highly recommended read. I would advise readers not to be daunted by the large size of the story though. Persist for at least the first 10 paragraphs and your attention will be drawn by then.

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I read Dumb, and it's definitely one of the best written stories I've ever come across on Nifty. Although it takes a very common base storyline (nerd tutors jock and they both fall in love), the author injects in a lot of attention to detail and fleshes out the characters (families and friends) very carefully. I like that a lot of attention is paid in the details of the interests and hobbies of the characters (e.g. Marcel's interest in Astronomy) and the elaboration in how Marcel finds ways to tutor Tim.

Definitely a highly recommended read. I would advise readers not to be daunted by the large size of the story though. Persist for at least the first 10 paragraphs and your attention will be drawn by then.

Totally agree, Dumb is one great story to read.

I was thinking to read it in parts but cant stop myself and finish it off in one shot, totally drawn to the unique relationship and the final product brought out of it.

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There is eroticism in every Singaporean hormone, none less than what we read on Nifty. Written in Singaporean style the stories will titillate & satisfy. :whistle:

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One of the more unusual / interesting stories I've come across in Nifty is My Brother's Frat Brother. Typical frat situation with 3-some, but there are some unusual twists along the way with the narrative shifting points of view that make it a pretty nice read.

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If you like gay stories with romance, you might want to check out Rip Tide. It's a very long story, so patience is needed. If you happen to manage to get all the way to Chapter 20, you'll notice that the story is not complete. Chapters 1 through 24 can be found at this URL (a Yahoo group), with the final chapter 25 here.

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Just finished reading David's Initiation again. Third time reading. I wish people will read it despite it's length, it's just like your HIMYM those long serial dramas.

Cried god-know-how-many-times. I have certainly enjoyed the story. Hope you will like it too.

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IMpere:

Just finished reading David's Initiation again. Third time reading. I wish people will read it despite it's length, it's just like your HIMYM those long serial dramas.

Cried god-know-how-many-times. I have certainly enjoyed the story. Hope you will like it too.

I will download DAvid's Initiation & read it later.

Thanks guys for the sharing.

I like Football house,

but i also like the romance.

Here's the latest Story I read.

VERY ROMANTIC! and very good! soon become my favorite of all time after Dumb.

7. Title: Charlie (Long, Romance, No-Sex, Comedy, High-school, Suspense, Coming-out)

This is my favorite author. He's very productive! Every Tuesday he posted a new chapter. High quality writing. & He really build a plot and structure of the novel, before start writing. I admire him.

And He's also creative! This is a story that very unique, never before done by anyone.

The story told from a perspective of a vain-self centered hot School-jock named Derek. What unique is, the protagonist of the story is a homo-phobic straight guy. Derek is the perfect popular school hunk that everybody loved, his world is perfect, that until he found out that his best friend Charlie is gay... For a straight guy who is homo-phobic, what he's gonna do? Whatever Derek did is the thing that drive this story into an emotional roller coaster in every chapter. Especially when things turn bad, and very very sad.

I give this five star.

http://www.gayauthors.org/story/Hamen%20Cheese/charlie/1

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I read Charlie, and the story is quite well thought out. I had wondered why Charlie never attempted to tell Derek the truth, but the last few chapters cleared that up quite well. Small little details throughout the story are tied up nicely with no loose ends, like Derek's introspection in Chapter 11 about a voice in his mind telling him how he should be thinking about a "sexy and gorgeous woman" all add up and make sense with in the revelations of Part 4. Will definitely look forward to reading more chapters. I'm not even sure if Derek is actually straight now :hat:

On a small detour, I happened to randomly come across Social Skills, which is fairly well written. It follows the very sterotypical plot of nerd tutoring jock, but with some unusual twists like the jock making the first move. Characters are generally well fleshed out each with their own depth and dimensionality.

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Check out this book, i wrote it . PS: It's in progress. Please give feedback

http://www.wattpad.c...ing-new-boyxboy

Hey, thanks for sharing your story.

It's good to know that someone have talent to write and dare to share.

Please keep it up bro. You can be a good writer too.

I just wish someone can write something about Singapore though. haha. like real NSF encounter, or real Student life here in SG. That will be hot to read.

As for the input for your writing, If you need it,.. I think I better send it to you via personal message. :)

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      I tried to be his teacher "pet" but my chances are so slim...since all the girls are spazzing about him too
      and I'm sort of the silent emo guy in classes 
      How guys how 
      Is my hope out of reach?
    • Crumplerboi Midnight Kayaks (Life Story)
      By Crumplerboi
      Seen many who shared their life story here like Larry and Yas. So with the support of Yas himself I would like to share something here on my own. This aint an exam or an ariticle where perfect english or a story with top notch grammar so pardon me on that. Here we go...
       
      Part 1
       
      “You got into AC?” That voice echoed from behind me.
       
      I turned around and glance. It was Byrant, my bestie since P1. It was the day of our PSLE results and both of us did exceptionally well.
       
      “Yeah you too? “ I answered back while looking down on my result slip. It was expectation from both of parents whom are both Teachers to get into prestigious school. I hurried him off so that I could head to my Mum’s school and show her my result slip.
       
      It wasn’t until 3 years later when we were in Secondary 3 that something engulfs. I had no idea if it was fated or destined that I was in the same class as Byrant from P1 till secondary. At that point girls were my thing and boys seem to attract me in a unique manner. It is like I have eye candies in school I can drool at em but I can only love my GF back than who happened to be in Raffles Girls.
       
      It was somewhere nearing my birthday that we separated. Due to her interest in her studies and me being too busy with school (Prefect and ECA Captain) we eventually drifted. But it was no dramatic separation but a peaceful one where we bid our farewell and exchange pinky to entrust each other with the bond we had and to remain friends. Yes I know Pinky well I was 14 back then.
       
      I sat down facing the harbor (now known as Vivocity) and think about what had went wrong and how somewhere rather inside I find sexually attracted to the eye candies in school. Byrant came with 2 sticks of Ice Stick. Those were the time when it was Popular but now I don’t even see it anywhere much perhaps the modified version.
       
      “ Hey Aaron whats wrong man “ jabbing me on my shoulder while asking that and simultaneously passing me one of the ice stick. I twisted the plastic tip with my teeth and broke it open.
       
      “ Nahx nothing… Me and her. We decided what is best for us and …. “
       
      Before I could even finish my sentence, from the corner of my eyes I could see him smiling sheepishly and he blurted out “ so she finally figured out you wanted best of both world? “
       
      I choked on the ice stick I was indulging on and turn to face him, “ WHAT ?!?! “
       
      I wasn’t expecting this from my bestie of 9 years to be saying in such a tone.
       
      “ Come on man, you still need to hide from me ? Those you ogle at in school and your infatuation with those swimmers and your fellow soccer mates. Dude it is obvious I am always there when you have training remember? “
       
      Byrant was in swimming and always stayed back to accompany me for my trainings as we both live quite near to each other.
       
      I was taken back and blushed at his comments but tried to put on a brave front. Ego you would call it and did not want to jeopardize anything between us.
       
      “ Nahx I just admire how their physique is and nothing sexual “
       
      The sound of thunder clapping through the skies and we quickly head for shelter. We had our dinner and parted ways after. No SMS neither MSN conversation nor the usual phone call that night ………
    • Mr Lim the security guard (fiction)
      By Chubby bttm
      Mr Lim was a security guard at the building where I was working. Every morning I would pass him by with a casual greeting. Unknown to him however, I secretly lust for his manly sculpted body. You see Mr Lim was not your average security with a dim witted face and a lumpy pork belly. He in his 40s was rather fit and had a tight body. In fact a muscular one even. 
      When I first enter the building for my job interview last year January, I was pleasantly surprised to be greeted by the tall muscled hunky guard. At first I sight, I was immediately awe stricken by his tight seasoned uniform that wraps his muscular physic seamlessly. You could see he had been hitting the gym frequently by the shear size of his bulging biceps which stretch the sleeves of his uniform tightly. As I was clueless of the direction, I shyly approach him, trying my best to hide the lust I felt to his body. 
      "Sorry sir, do you know the direction to xxx office?" I levelled my head up towards him as I ask him. 
      "3rd level Turn Right" he answered in his rusty tone
      Since then we had made an acquaintance of each other, and we would frequent greetings as I enter or leave the building.
      One Friday night, after I had just completed my report to the boss. I stretch my arms before going down for a light refreshment. It was then I saw him striding to the toilet. It was dark and I Guess he and I were the only people on the level. Clouded by my tiredness and lust, instinctively I stalk him into the gents when  I saw him at the urinal. I join in, but as I was taking out my junk for a pee, I glanced through his thighs. What I saw were rather arousing. It was a a nicely matured cock with the size of a cola can.
      Noticing my dilated pupil and dumbfounded face, Mr Lim grinned ,"you like what you see boy?"
      Instantaneously , my face reddened, I quickly turn around ready to run away. Before I could run however, I felt his strong firm hand grap my shoulder.
      "Don't be shy boy" he grinned cheekily with another on his 9 inch Monster.
      Slowly he turned me around and gently he put my shaking hands on his thick vascular rod.
      It was warm, soft, hard and wet. A weird sensation for me as I had never touch the cock of another man. Slowly I started stroking his cock.
      "Nice boy , you like it?" He asked and I slowly nodded, dumbfounded.
      "Well then, you wanna lick it ?" He grinned playfully.
      What was I supposed to do. Walk away and pretend nothing happen? Of course not. Engulfed my lust, I knee in front of him and with my tongues out and begin to lick in like a lollipop. 
      Slowly, with the tips of my tongue I caress his baby maker up and and down. Slowly and ticklishly, until his strong firm hand got behind my head and direct my mouth to his cock.
      "Suck it boy, I'm really horny now" the man of steel roared.
      Dutifully, I wrapped my teeth with my lips and began to insert his huge tool into my tight upper hole.
      In and out, he rhythmically swayed his hip and fuck my mouth like the pussy it is.
      "Oh yes, you little slut, you want my cock since the day we met didn't you. You want me to feed you my steaming white milk now don't you." He teased as he used my upper hole like a toy.
      "Oh yes Sir give it to me please, ever since I met you. I wanna be your personal cum dump" I whimper underneath his manhood
      "Well now you got it," as he said that he roared and shot a stream of white fluid into my orifice. 
      I tried to swallowed it whole, but it's just too much and white content began to leak out of my mouth.
      After which I began to wash up and as I prepare to leave, Mr Lim griped my collar.
      "Now where are you going, I am not done with you yet." he continued:" you are coming with me, I want to feel that tight butt of yours"
      I was swayed by his dominant tone and proceed with him to his apartment. 
       
      To be continued


    • Guest Decendant22
      Lost Virginity To Hunk
      By Guest Decendant22
      once while traveling in train a group of guys were watching gay porn of skinny cross dresser guy and were looking at me with lust. I also tried to watch that porn from their tab and that CD guy in that porn movie was very similar as me. I was feeling to do so but I didn’t react.   Then when at home I searched web and joined few gay social networking sites and uploaded my naked body pics. I started getting huge messages for sex encounters. I did never know that guys would love me this much. I started chatting on sites and yahoo messenger as well. Then I got a friend request on yahoo messenger. He told he viewed my profile and like it. We talked for some time about sexual liking and all. He was very excited to know I was virgin. Then he asked for cam 2 cam chat and we started. My god, that guy was really very muscular and his rod was very thick and long. I should be at least 7″. I asked him why he likes me. He replied he wanted a slim gf and I got perfect figure. Then we talked about place and both of us were not having place so we decided to meet in public place.
        We decided this meet at a mall. I waited there for around 10-15 min and there he came with smile on his face. We went inside mall and directly went to McDonalds shop and spent around half hour eating burger, French fries etc. Whole time he was praising me. He told he like me so much. He told my butts are even beautiful than female pussy. He said he want to make my small white ass butts into red spanking and fucking hard. The whole time he was just imagining about me and sex. Finally after eating we moved to washroom and surprisingly it was empty there was no one. He whispered in my ears that he wants to see and touch my butts once. I said no someone will see us. He pushed me in the toilet and locked door.
        Now we were both in toilet he quickly unzipped my jeans and underwear and saw my ass butts. He was staring very crazily at my butts. He put his very hard hands on my butts and spanked it. I was feeling very naughty and I was in heavens. Then he lean down and put his lips on my butts and quickly left a love bite on my small and soft butts. Then he pooled over my T-shirt and started licking and biting my little nipples. I was moaning in pleasure. Then he unzipped his jeans and pulled out his monster cock. It was rock hard. I think it was more than 7″ and very thick. He started rubbing his cock on my ass hole I was ready for losing my virginity and he whispered in my ears “baby guess what, I got a place for this. Be my little sweet gf today”. I turned towards him with smile on my face. We quickly got ready. Then we confirmed there’s no one outside and got outside.
        There was a newly built apartment. He told he his friend has flat here and its all free for us. We moved to the flat and it was awesome well furnished.  He locked the door, opened his sack and there was a DVD in his sack. He switched on the TV and inserted DVD in drive. It was gay porn DVD. It started with a very skinny guy like me in ladies dress and an old man. He looked at me and said “sweetie I really want u like this.”. I said I never did cross dressing. He smiled and gave a pack from his sack to me. I opened it and it was pink colored bra, panties, short skirt and top and also a nice sexy ladies night suit. Also there was a hair wig. I wore the bra, panties and skirt and top. I also wore the wig. He kept staring at me and said “Baby u don’t really need make up! You are my angel. Come to me”. He hugged me so tight. I felt like a real girl. Then he kissed on my lips and said “my god what a smooth and soft lips u have. Will u be my gf in real honey?” He smooch me for around 10 min. Then he sat on bed and got undressed. He was totally naked. He told me to be in lingerie only so I did. Then he pointed me to his lap. I sat on his lap and he started squeezing my small nipples. He was doing it very hard I was moaning in pleasure as well as little pain.
        As porn movie was going on his cock was erect and touching my asshole over panties. Then as the CD guy in movie started sucking cock I also felt same. So I sat besides and took his cock in my small hands. He was very hot and I started stroking it. Then I placed a kiss on its cock head. Then I slowly took his cock in my mouth and started sucking. I couldn’t take his full cock as it was very huge. He was moaning and shouting suck me my dear gf. You are my bitch today. After 5 min he stopped me and told me to sleep on the bed. I slept on the bed. He wore condom and started rubbing his cock on my ass hole over the panties. I was feeling very excited. I told him plz fuck me. I m your bitch plz now fuck me. Then he removed my panties and gave a hard stroke. And omg it was pain I started crying. His half cock was in then he again used all his force and all of his cock was inside me. He shouted this is called man force my bitch u r so tight. Now you are no more virgin. He slept over me and started giving strokes hard and kept kissing my back and squeezing my nipples with hands.
        Then after 15-20 min he increased the speed to very fast.. He increased the speed high and suddenly removed his cock removed condom and started shooting his hard load all over my ass hole. It was so hot I really wanted that cum inside my ass. He shoot his load all over my back and then on my chest nipples and also on my lips face. He was moaning hard. He said he never had this much of load. He slept down on bed and I slept over his with my back on him. He kept pressing and pinching my nipples hard. After few min I slept when I woke up  he was again fucking me while I was sleeping over him. Then he kept fucking me and we turned into doggy style. I was enjoying being like a dog and getting fucked badly. He started spanking my soft butts very hard. I was even excited and moaning like a bitch. I continued moaning like spank my butts hard. Make my butts red. Fuck me. Oh yeah. Fuck me.
        Finally the last session was He slept over me like my husband or bf and started kissing on my lips, on my nipples on my stomach.. He slept over me for around 1 hour kissing my whole body. And we finished our session. Now I am his girl friend and we are planing for our next meet.
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